Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


Addicted to a touch a taste,
with your arm around my waist,
A new meaning to being whipped,
Fire whip, my skin is ripped,
With a kiss you own my soul,
All my pieces you make whole,
For all the times you kissed my lips,
Your love forever signed my hips,
Hidden from everyone's eyes,
My hands have scarred my side,
The name of my owner,
As you move a little closer,
Not knowing that under my love,
is your name written in blood,
©2009 ~Dorkslayer
:icondorkslayer:

Author's Comments

Tho some lines mite be thought to reffer to sex, it has NOTHING to do with it. Its about a scar i used to have, i had cut my bf's name in my hip, and thts what this is about. Its an older poem.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconheartbrokensamurai:
i still like it, doesnt matter how old it is.
its what its about,that matters.

i wrote my gf a poem in my blood and she loved it,
i mean teh poem sucked ass but i guess she liked the sacrifice..

--
"a life without pain isnt a life at all.
its the pain that keeps us going.
keeps us pushing to be better.
without pain we're only waiting to die"

-me- heartbrokensamurai-
:icondorkslayer:
ya, i used to give my bf notes in blood, mostly they said i'm srry, cuz he hated when i cut myself, but other times i just wrote "i love you."

--
XxInSaNiTy's~AnGeLxX

~~~"and i'm your angel"~~~

92% of the teenage population has switched to rap.If you are the 8% who ROCKS ,copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconheartbrokensamurai:
i drew her a picture one when i got a cut from a razor accidently.(how ironic)and i always pick scabs,XP
and like it was just a stupid picture of two people kissing with a heart above their heads.
like takes five seconds to draw..
she loved it.
i dont get her.lol.

--
"a life without pain isnt a life at all.
its the pain that keeps us going.
keeps us pushing to be better.
without pain we're only waiting to die"

-me- heartbrokensamurai-
:iconfriendoftheshadows:
god ur so talented....
and i am so jealous =/

--
So anyway, right, thats it! Piss off. Ive got some cats to see. Bloody things, I hate those bloody cats; The way they meow and they piss everywhere, and their s#&t smells just, bloody awful, all over my furniture...

Gregg the Reaper
:icondorkslayer:
i find that the smallest things are sometimes the most special, it just shows you think of you. :P

--
XxInSaNiTy's~AnGeLxX

~~~"and i'm your angel"~~~

92% of the teenage population has switched to rap.If you are the 8% who ROCKS ,copy & paste this in your signature.
:icondorkslayer:
Well thx!! haha it's okay, i've been writing for years, so you could say i practice. XD

--
XxInSaNiTy's~AnGeLxX

~~~"and i'm your angel"~~~

92% of the teenage population has switched to rap.If you are the 8% who ROCKS ,copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconheartbrokensamurai:
i know. people overlook everything.

--
"a life without pain isnt a life at all.
its the pain that keeps us going.
keeps us pushing to be better.
without pain we're only waiting to die"

-me- heartbrokensamurai-
:icondorkslayer:
amen :P

--
XxInSaNiTy's~AnGeLxX

~~~"and i'm your angel"~~~

92% of the teenage population has switched to rap.If you are the 8% who ROCKS ,copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconheartbrokensamurai:
how are u, um.
dork slayer?


...

dork?
idk what to call u.
im cory btw.

--
"a life without pain isnt a life at all.
its the pain that keeps us going.
keeps us pushing to be better.
without pain we're only waiting to die"

-me- heartbrokensamurai-

Details

November 5
611 bytes

Statistics

13
3 [who?]
20 (0 today)
1 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map